①强调句
〔原文〕I met him in the street yesterday.
〔修正〕It was in the street that I met him yesterday.
It was yesterday that I met him in the street.
②由with或without引导的短语.如:
He sat in a chair with a newspaper in the hand.
③分词短语.如:
Satisfied with the result,He decided to go on with a new experiment.
④倒装句.如:
Only in this way can we achieve our goal.
Never before have I seen such a wonderful film.
Not only should we study in the college, but also learn how to be a decent person.
⑤省略句.如:
If so,victory will be ours.
You can make some changes wherever necessary.
3.通过分句和合句,增强句子的连贯性和表现力.
〔原文〕He stopped us half an hour ago. He made us catch the next offender.
〔修正〕He stopped us half an hour ago and made us catch the next offender.
〔原文〕We had a short rest. Then we began to play happily. We sang and danced.
Some told stories. Some played chess.
〔修正〕After a short rest, we had great fun singing and dancing, telling jokes and playing chess.注意使用不同长度的句子,要结合使用,不能只用短句或只用长句.
4.学会使用过渡词.如:
①递进: then(然后), besides(还有), furthermore(而且), moreover(此外)等.
②转折: however(然而), but(但是), on the contrary (相反), after all(毕竟)等.
③总结: finally(最后), at last(最后), in brief(总之), in conclusion(最后)等.
④强调: indeed(确实), certainly(一定), surely(确定), above all(尤其)等.
⑤对比: in the same way(同样地), just as(正如), on the one hand…on the other hand(一方面……另一方面……)等.
相似的比较: similarly, in the same manner 相反的比较: on the other hand, conversely, whereas, while, instead, nevertheless, in contrast, on the contrary, compared with …,
5.注意使用词组、习语来代替一些单词,以增加文采.如:
〔原文〕A new railway is being built in my hometown.
〔修正〕A new railway is under construction in my hometown.
6.避免重复使用某一单词或短语.如:
〔原文〕I like reading while my brother likes watching television.
〔修正〕I like reading while my brother enjoys watching television.
I like reading while watching television appeals to my brother.
三、 结尾
1、 All in all, what really matters is, in fact, that……(比如说到和谐社会 All in all, what really matters is, in fact, that we should build our society a harmonious society.)
2、 Therefore, it's not difficult to draw a conclusion that……
3、 As a result , we should take effective measures to do sth.(我们必须采取一些有效的措施来做些什么)
4、 From what has been discussed above , we may conclude that ……
5、 Obviously(此为过渡短语), we can draw the conclusion that good manners arise from politeness and respect for others.
一些用法:
1、 陈述个人的观点
It is alleged that(据说)
In my view, both sides are partly right(两方面都部分的正确)
As far as I am concerned(就我而言)
As regards to me
My own point of view is that……
Personally, I believe that……
My experience tells me that……
The invention of the handset, I dare to say, turns out to be a tremendous hit.
The application of web sites, I dare to say, turns out to be a greatly hit.
It comes as no surprise that Chinese economy becomes increasingly hot.
2、 陈述别人的观点
Other individuals, however, take the attitude that……
(错误的观点)sb is under the false belief that……
3、 图表作文
The table showsindicates reveals that ……(表明、暗示、揭示)
According to the statistics showing in that graph, we can easliy seefound……(根据表中的数据,我们可以看见,发现)
As seen from the chart/ As is portrayed in the picture
Sales went into a slight decline=sales declined slightly(小幅下降)
Sales declined dramatically/sharply/greatly/hugely (大幅下降)高考英语作文万能模板
A brief glimpse at our campus (the picture/cartoon/caricature) vividly shows that mobile phone, becoming more and more prevalent.
好的替代
the machinethe device 代替 computer
handset代替 cell phone
*The Middle Kingdom代替 China
intenselycrucially important代替 very important (it is crucially important that the benefits of collective be on our priority.)
approaches代替 ways
current(currently) 代替 now
growing individuals代替 more and more people
individuals/ characters/ folks 代替 people, persons
positive, favorable, rosy(美好的), promising(有希望的), perfect, pleasurable, excellent, outstanding, 代替 good
unfavorable, poor, adverse, ill 代替 bad
an army of, an ocean of, a multitude of 代替 many, a lot of
take the attitude that, hold the view that, it is widely shared that, it is universally acknowledged that 代替 think
affair, business, matter 代替 thing
for my part, from my own perspective 代替 in my opinion
beneficial, rewarding 代替 helpful
exceedingly, extremely, intensely 代替 very
pour attention into代替 pay attention to
bear in mind that代替remember
enjoy, possess代替 have
to name only a few/ as an example代替for example/ instance
常用短语
老年人the oldelderly aged elderly population senior citizens
年轻人youthyoungster young adults adolescent
中年人middle adults
网吧cyber café 网虫mouse potato 电视迷couch potato
优秀的学生outstanding/superior/rare/top students
坏的影响ill effects
农村rural 郊区suburban 城里urban
在当代社会in contemporary society
双赢a win-win situation 双输 a lose-lose situation
建设有中国特色的社会主义build socialism with Chinese characteristics ,form a economic system with Chinese characteristics
写信中
I would appreciate it very much If you ……